Common
Errors of Written Expression and Ways
of Avoiding Them*
Jennifer
Clarke
 
5.
Spelling and using the wrong
word
`Words
mean what I want them to
mean'
The
meaning of words can change
over time, and words can
take on different meanings
in different contexts -
e.g. `intercourse' in section
92 of the Constitution,
compared with its usage
in The Joy of Sex.
However, words cannot
take on whatever meanings
you want to give them.
If you are in doubt about
the meaning of a word, look
it up in the dictionary
(a large book which lists
the meanings of words, their
usages and their origins).
Affect/effect
It's
important to sort out the
difference between verbs
(`doing words') or nouns
(`name words') in this context.
To affect something
(verb) means `to have
an impact on something',
e.g. `taking that ecstasy
really affected my
exam performance' or, in
a passive form, `my exam
performance was really affected
by that ecstasy'.5
To
effect something
(verb) means `to bring something
about', e.g. `he single-handedly
effected the changes
to the law school curriculum'
or, in the passive form,
`the changes to the law
school curriculum were effected
by him single-handedly'.
an effect (noun)
means `an impact', e.g.
`that ecstasy really had
an effect on me'.
an affect (noun,
in psychology) means a feeling
or emotion, as in `she suffered
loss of affect after
her breakdown'. This word
would appear infrequently
in law papers.
Tenet/tenant
A
tenet is a principle
or doctrine. A tenant
is a leaseholder, a person
in rented accommodation
or, in mediaeval property
law, the person who held
land of the Crown. Despite
repeated student assertions
to the contrary, there are
no such things as `the fundamental
tenants of the common
law'.
Led/lead
To
lead
(pronounced `leed') means
`to conduct or take along
the way', as in `my dog
is leading me for
a walk'.
led (pronounced `led')
is the past tense of `lead',
as in `my dog led
me for a walk yesterday'.
lead (pronounced
`led') is a heavy metal
found in the petrol used
in old cars.
Principle/principal
A
principle (noun)
is a norm or rule (a tenet!).
A principal (noun)
is the head of a school,
the person with whom a law
graduate signs articles
of clerkship or, in contract
law, a party to an agency
agreement. `The principal
issue before the court'
is the main issue in to
be decided. There is no
such thing as `the principle
issue'.
Aloud/allowed
These
are not the same word. Aloud
means `out loud', as in:
`I voiced my anxieties aloud'.
Allowed means `permitted',
as in: `Their mother never
allowed them to watch
Melrose Place' or `His disability
never allowed him
to walk again'.
Advert/avert
and adverse/averse
To
advert (to something)
means to refer to it.
To avert (something)
means either (a) to turn
(something) away, as in
`to avert one's eyes'
or (b) to ward something
off, as in `we averted
a catastrophe'.
Adverse means `opposed'
or `antagonistic', as in
`adverse criticism', `adverse
possession'.
Averse means `reluctant',
as in `he is not averse
to smoking marijuana for
breakfast'.
Peninsula/peninsular
A
peninsula (noun)
is a piece of land which
juts out into the sea, e.g.
Mornington Peninsula in
Melbourne.
Peninsular
is the adjective (describing
word) formed from peninsula.
It means 'of a peninsula',
as in 'peninsular inhabitants'
or 'peninsular history'
(a term sometimes used to
refer to the history of
the Iberian peninsula (Spain
and Portugal).
Council/counsel
A
council is a body
of people, usually charged
with specific business -
e.g. a council of war, Newcastle
City Council, the New South
Wales Aboriginal Land Council,
the Drug and Alcohol Council
of Australia, or the (Judicial
Committee of Her Majesty's)
Privy Council. Although
it is usually composed of
many people, a council is
a singular entity.
The
noun counsel (singular
or plural) refers to barristers
in legal proceedings. Judges
often address barristers
simply as 'counsel', regardless
of their name or gender.
We also refer to 'defence
counsel' or to 'counsel
for John Elliott, Mr Jeff
Sher QC and his junior'.
Counsel
comes from the verb to
counsel, which means
'to advise'. Thus we refer
to the University counselling
service. A person who 'keeps
her own counsel'
is someone who keeps her
opinions to herself.
There/their/they're
Use
the dictionary if you are
unsure about the difference
between the first and second
of these. They're
is a contraction (ie, an
abbreviated form, with something
taken out of the middle)
of `they are'.
Your/you're
Your
is the possessive form of
`you', as in `that's your
book - don't leave it behind'.
You're is a contraction
(abbreviated form) of `you
are'. Thus:
`You're
a really nasty person; I
think I'll steal your book'.
Practice/practise,
licence/license and advice/advise
Although
American usage is different,
in Australian English, to
practise is the verb
(`doing word') or adjective
(`describing word'), and
practice the noun:
e.g.
`If I ever graduate, I propose
to practise law.'
but:
The
same rule holds for licence/license
and advice/advise. Thus:
but:
The
holder of a licence
is called a licensee.
and:
but:
Attain/obtain
To
attain
means `to arrive at (something)',
as in `I am determined to
attain my goals'.
To obtain means `to
get (something)', as in
`I am determined to obtain
that book'.
Prescribe/proscribe
To
prescribe
means `to set out' or `to
require', as in: `The regulations
prescribe the payment of
a $200 fee' or `The doctor
routinely prescribed Valium
for constitutional law students'.
Hence prescription
is the word used to describe
a doctor's request to a
pharmacist or the manner
in which legal standards
are laid down in regulations.
To
proscribe means almost
the opposite - `to prohibit'
or `to outlaw', as in: `The
Menzies government attempted
to proscribe the Communist
Party'.
Precede/proceed
To
precede
means `to come before',
as in: `The 1999 Star Wars
movie precedes the episodes
which have already been
released'.
To
proceed means `to go
forth' or `to go ahead',
as in: `Shall we proceed
with this meeting?' or (in
the language of police officers)
`We proceeded in
a northerly direction along
Northbourne Avenue'. The
term `legal proceedings'
refers to litigation before
a court. There is no such
thing as `legal precedings'.
Compliment/complement
To
compliment
(someone) means to praise,
flatter or congratulate
them. `To pay someone a
compliment' means
to say something nice about
them, whether sincerely
or not. `With compliments'
on a note with a gift or
enclosure indicates that
it is sent as a favour.
`Complimentary' can
mean `free', as in `We got
complimentary tickets
to the Olympics synchronised
swimming final.'
To
complement means to
complete, make perfect,
or (colloquially) match,
as in `Prince Edward and
Sophie Rhys-Jones really
complement one another'
or `He drank his full complement
of alcohol'. `Complementary'
means `that which is required
to complete something'.
It cannot be used to refer
to ticket `freebies'.
Discreet/discrete
and discretion
Discreet
means wise, judicious or
restrained. It is sometimes
used to mean `secretive'.
Thus:
`Nobody
knows about her love
life because she is
so discreet'
or
`He's so indiscreet about
his own business that I wouldn't
tell him any of mine.'
The
noun built from `discreet'
is discretion.
Hence the saying `Discretion
is the better part of valour'
- circumspection or restraint
is an important part of
courage. However, because
discretion really
refers to wise or judicious
behaviour, in law we use
the term to refer to the
power to decide something
by exercising one's own
judgment. Thus:
(We
do not, however, talk about
people invested with discretion
exercising it `discreetly'.)
Discrete
looks as if it comes
from the same word base
as `discretion', but it
means something different.
It means detached, separate
or distinct, as in:
Dependent/dependant
and depending
To
be dependEnt
on someone means that you
rely on him or her. Dependence
or dependency
refers to the state of being
dependent on someone
or something - as in `She
suffers because of her dependency
on her boyfriend.'
You
should not use `dependent'
where you mean `depending'
to signal the contingency
of one event on another.
For example, you should
write:
`Depending
on the outcome of
the League game, I might
get lucky tonight.'
NOT
`Dependent on
the outcome of the League
game, I might get lucky
tonight.'
DependAnt
(a noun) refers to a person
who is dependent
on another, as in: `Her
household consists of Eustacia,
her husband and several
other dependants.'
Enunciate/annunciate
To
annunciate
means `to announce', but
carries a religious connotation.
In Christianity, `The Annunciation'
refers to the angel Gabriel's
announcement to Mary that
she would become the mother
of Christ. Draw your own
conclusions about the suitability
of this term for a law paper.
To
enunciate means `to
pronounce' or `to state
or declare definitively',
as in:
Prospective/perspective
Prospective
means `of the future' or
`potential' or `anticipated',
as in `my prospective
husband' or `a statute
with prospective
[ie, the opposite of retrospective]
operation'.
Perspective
has several related meanings,
but those most likely to
occur in a law paper are
`point of view', as in:
`The
judges should look at the
issue from the defendant's
perspective.'
or
`true proportion', as in:
Imply/infer
The
meanings of these words
overlap, but each has a
distinct meaning.
To
infer means `to derive
by reasoning from premises
or evidence', as in:
In
the law of evidence, an
inference refers
to a conclusion with some
probability, whether
or not it is strictly derived
logically from the premises
on which it is based.
To
imply means `to indicate
or suggest an obscured meaning
or conclusion', as in:
`The
judges discovered
the terms of the contract
by a process of implication.'
OR
`Her comments implied
a lack of satisfaction with
her job.'
The
difference between the two
terms is subtle, but might
be thought about like this.
Inferring involves
value-adding - processing
information to produce a
conclusion which wasn't
there before - whereas implying
involves hinting at,
or discovering, something
which already exists but
remains unexpressed.
To
imply has another related
meaning. It can mean `to
involve as a necessary circumstance',
as in:
OR
`Speech implies a speaker.'
Debatable/doubtful
Students
often use the word debatable
(often misspelt `debateable')
to indicate that a proposition
is uncertain or in doubt.
However, debatable
means `capable of being
debated' or `in dispute',
whereas doubtful
means `uncertain'. For example:
Its/it's
It's
needs an apostrophe when
it is a contraction (abbreviation)
of `it is'.
e.g. `It's a lovely
day, isn't it?'
`Its'
does not need an
apostrophe when it is used
possessively. This seems
to run contrary to the general
rule about possessive apostrophes
(discussed below) but `its'
is an exception to that
general rule! `Its' is
like `his', `her' or `their'
- a possessive form of a
pronoun (a word which stands
in for a noun):
e.g.
`We cornered the alien,
and chopped its head
off.'
Where
it might have been possible
to write, were the alien's
sex known or knowable:
`We
cornered the alien, and
chopped her head
off.'
Note
that there is no such word
as `its'' with an
apostrophe after
the `s'.
Who/whose/who's/which
`Who'
is used for people. `Which'
is used for things. In deciding
which of these words to
use, ask yourself whether
you are dealing with a person
or a group of people:
e.g.
I complained to the head
of ATSIC, who sent
me a reply.
I complained to ATSIC, which
sent me a reply.
`Whose'
is the possessive form of
`who'. According to the
Macquarie Dictionary, it
can also be the possessive
form of `which':
e.g.
`Whose book is that?'
`A car whose tyres
are flat', meaning `A car
the tyres of which are
flat.'
`Who's'
is not the same word. `Who's'
is a contraction (abbreviation)
of `who is':
e.g.
There's the hopeless lawyer
who's running the
test case.
Less/fewer
and amount/number
The
checkout sign in Woolies
that says `15 items or less'
is not correct. Where you
refer to a number of
single items, you need
to use `fewer', not `less'.
`Less' indicates a smaller
amount of a single thing.
e.g.
`We drank less beer
than last time.'
`We drank fewer bottles
than last time.'
`I spent less money
than he did.'
`He bought fewer
magazines than I
did.'
Similarly,
`amount' is used to indicate
quantities of commodities
or intangibles which are
considered to be made
up of the same thing (e.g.
money, coffee, flour, time,
attention), whereas `number'
is used to indicate quantities
of independent items.
e.g.
`There were a large number
(not `amount') of people
in the room.'
`He gave me a large amount
of money.'
but: `He gave me a large
number of coins.'
Either/or
and neither/nor
These words are used in
limited circumstances to
indicate choices between
things. Note that `nor'
cannot be preceded by `either',
only by `neither', as the
`neither/nor' combination
signals a set of negative
choices:
e.g.
`I must take either
Property or Criminal
Law this year.'
`I want to take neither
Property nor Criminal
Law this year.'
`Neither the lecturer
nor the students
liked the assessment package.'
Making
comparisons - use the right
preposition
There
are correct and incorrect
ways of using words like
`compared', `different'
and `similar'. The correct
forms are:
compared
with (not `compared
to')
different from (not
different to')
similar to (not `similar
with')
Different
words built from the same
base
If
different words have been
built from the same word
base, they may have different
meanings. For example,
the adverb `alternately'
means `by turns':
e.g.
He ate ice cream and parmesan
cheese alternately.
The traffic lights flashed
alternately between
red and green.
But
`alternatively',
a word more likely to occur
in a law paper, refers to
a choice between two things
or possibilities.
e.g.
The High Court may decide the issue.
Alternatively, the judges may
avoid it altogether.
Sometimes
students encounter difficulties
building words from their
base:
e.g.
`administeration'. The base
verb is `to administer', but the noun
is `administration' - ie, the `e'
is dropped.
`pronounciation'.
The base verb is `to pronounce', but
the noun is `pronunciation' - ie,
the `o' is dropped.
If
in doubt about the right
spelling of words like this,
check the dictionary.
Words
stuck together
There
is no such word as `alot'.
`To allot something' means
to allocate something. `A
lot' (two separate words)
means `many'.
Similarly,
there is no such word as
`alright'. It should be
two words: `all right'.
The same goes for `infact'
- it should be `in fact'.
Words
fragmented
Some
words have developed as
composites of several words
run together. In modern
English there is no need
to break them up again.
Examples include:
Nevertheless,
not `never the less'
Nonetheless,
not `none the less'
(although `none-the-less'
is still sometimes used)
Nothwithstanding,
not `not with standing'
Negative
or positive?
The
words `no' and `not' are
often added before words
to signify their negative
forms, as in:
It
is amazing how often people
leave `no' or `not' out
of such sentences, conveying
the opposite of their intended
meaning.
Many
words can be turned into
negatives by the addition
of a prefix (a new
front end of the word) or
a suffix (a new rear
end). Examples of negative
prefixes include `non',
`un', `in', `ir' and sometimes
`a'. It is important to
choose the right prefix,
e.g.:
Sometimes
using a different prefix
may change the meaning slightly.
For example, immoral
means `not conforming to
moral standards'. Used to
describe a person, it can
mean someone who understands
moral standards but departs
from them. On the other
hand, amoral means
`without morality'. Used
to describe a person, it
can signify someone who
does not understand moral
standards and has none from
which to depart. Similarly,
uninterested means `lacking
in interest', as in `I am
really uninterested in your
money problems'. But disinterested
means `impartial, unbiased',
as in `Let's hope the umpire
is disinterested'.
A
negative suffix is `less',
which means `without'. For
example:
Note
that there is no such word
as `numberless'.
In
physics, two negatives make
a positive. It's the same
in English. However, while
two `not's in a sentence
looks silly, one `not' followed
by a word with a negative
prefix is sometimes
used where a more subtle
or understated meaning is
intended. For example, it
is possible to `damn someone
with faint praise' by saying
he or she is `not unfriendly',
which does not quite go
so far as to suggest that
the person is friendly.
The use of `not uncommon'
in the sentence below provides
another example.
Do
not use a negative prefix
and a negative suffix for
the same word. A not uncommon
(sorry, but it's neither
common nor uncommon!) example
is `irregardless'.
If
in doubt about negative
forms of words, consult
a dictionary.
Words
which half the population
spells incorrectly
Here
are some words which more
than 50 per cent of students
seem to spell incorrectly:
separate,
not `seperate'
relevant,
not `relevent'
accommodation,
not `accomodation'
harassment,
not `harrassment'
argument,
not `arguement'
definitely,
not `definately'
implement,
not `impliment'
occasion,
not `ocassion'
debatable,
not `debateable'
prerogative,
not `perogative'
Ye
olde terminology
Some
student papers employ words
which are becoming archaic,
apparently because they
sound better. For example,
`whilst' is commonly used
when `while' would be preferable.
Does
size matter?
Students
often seem to choose words
for no better reason than
that they are longer or
sound more bombastic. A
common example is `utilise'
instead of `use'.
Confusion
of adjectives and nouns
`Women'
and `men' are nouns. `Female'
and `male' are adjectives.
A male person is
a man. Thus it is
not correct to write `males
shouldn't be allowed into
Law School'. Similarly,
`Aborigines' is a noun;
`Aboriginal' is an adjective.
An Aboriginal person
is an Aborigine.
(This usage is complicated
by the fact that some Commonwealth
and state legislation uses
`Aboriginal' as a noun.)
Get
the judge right
You
might have understandable
trouble with Mr Justice
Hardie Boys (NZ Court of
Appeal), Lord Morris of
Borth-y-Gest or Lord Jauncey
of Tullichettle. Even Mr
Justice Gobbo of the Victorian
Supreme Court might suffer
a little from misspelling.
However,
it is a good idea to spell
judges' names correctly.
Try to notice how their
names are spelt when you
read cases. Current and
former Australian High Court
judges whose names are regularly
misspelt include Justices
Fullagar (usually
misspelt `Fullager or Fullaghar'),
Stephen (usually
misspelt `Stephens'), Deane
(misspelt `Dean') and
Gaudron (sometimes
misspelt `Guadron' or even
`Gauldron' (see below)).
Don't forget to put a `J'
(or `CJ' if appropriate,
or `JJ' for more than one
judge) after the
judge's name, not before
it.
Other
people's dumb mistakes
Few
things are more infuriating
for the person marking essays
than encountering the same
dumb mistakes in several
papers. A common example
- one probably traceable
to old exam summaries -
is `Justice Gauldron'.
5
Another
use of to affect
is fairly rare - it can
refer to people putting
on airs, as in `he affected
an injured expression',
which means `he tried to
look injured'.
 
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